good vibe, solid flow, weak percussion.
I like the mix of synths in this song a lot more then your others. They seem to work well together, and the flow of the song is steady and constant throughout!
The melodic line is again quite interesting, a little repetetive, but nothing major. I would say the weakest part of this song is the percussion, be sure to spend more time with them, it seems the weakest part of most of your songs is the percussion. In this one it isn't so bad, but it's still not all together enough to carry the song, if nothing else works, try first by creating the standard 4 kick per measure deal, and then go nuts from there.
good effort, keep up the good fight and keep em coming!