Boom! Right off the bat you've set the tone for everything dude. For life, for love, for friends, for Odin :D
First Impressions: Nice mixdown, clean sounds, very groovy! Grooving along nicely to the track! Fantastic singing, very soft piece and sounds cool dude. All the best with your album.
Composition: Spot on! Not much to suggest here dude. Your piano is flairing nicely, your guitar is strumming along well and your chord progressions are sound. Drums have a good groove to them. Breakdowns and build ups are nice. Singing is just wow! So yeah, composition 5/5
Mixing: The lyrics / words aren't coming through clear enough dude. Can't really follow what's being said. Your snare and drums at 1:26 feel a bit off, like too sharp? Something feels slightly off about them. Guitar is perfect. Piano is nice, some James Bond vibes! Bass is fine. Just your drums are the one the one that stand out a bit to me dude and the vocals.
So for me, just the mixing needs work. Other than that dude, spot on for your genre and your style! :)