mm I am liking the bass pulse and the synths in the far corners.. give me a feeling of xenogears or xenosaga..
liking the atmospheric buildup. I know from my account it may look like I don't have a lot of music up, but if you take the hyphen out of my name you'll see I've submitted hundreds of songs and been here since 2003. I also submit remasters of my music under my alt, iotheeternal.
Upon saying that, I like your little bridge.. but right after I find the synths are a big too much , as in they don't provide a lot of audio breathing room in the mind. Things get better once you start to stutter them and add more melodies though.
I am liking the movement of the piece - 2:17 is a nice little break - I like how this music reminds me of music from an earlier era. The 2:45 mark in your third little stanza brings some really nice sounds together where everything works well harmoniously - I really like this part - feels well balanced :)
good job! I shall monitor your progress as you submit more :)