I really like this kind of music a little anxious/depressing and a little robotic like MIDI and, hum...
Sorry, I'm very bad at "criticizing" everything in the field of music, I couldn't find the words what I like in this music.
I'll just say that it was one of the best things in the game for which it was created, and that I let it spin in the background just to hear it.
Glad that its creator has shared your NewGrounds account with me so I can hear what you will produce in the future... Even if it doesn't stay in the same domain, of course ;-)