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I've been working on this from December 30th, 2018 for 46 hours, but majority of the project was done today. I guess that's some sort of a motivation since I got scouted on NG Audio Portal by JY_2000 (thanks a lot mate!). Be sure to check out his awesome stuff as well. Thanks for votes and comments in advance!

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Nice pads on the intro. The sound selection seems a bit off though. Like the snare is quite cliché. Anyway, nice rolls / variation on the snares, composition wise.

The pads and synths are okay. That backing synth at 1:15 or so is strong as is the melody at 1:30.

Your low past drum bit shortly after that sounds like it popped to early. The drums at the drop are nice and complex.

You need to glue the sections together a bit more.

Other than that dude, good job!

feandesign responds:

Thanks a lot man, much appreciated! Yeah, I should definitely find or make myself some better drum samples, especially the snare which in fact is the legacy one from FL Studio lol... I'll surely need to work harder on other projects in the future, anyway I'm glad you liked it!

whoaaa thats waaay too much bass mister haha.. waaay too much bass.. tone it down :P

I like the melody in the bg but your levels are way too loud and that bass is too powerful hehe coupled esp. with the main backing synth - it's cool but your percussion is almost entirely drowned out as a result, as is the melody playing in the far background. Too much is trying to compete for control here.

Still, at least nothing is clipping - my advice - just because you CAN use all of the stereo field, doesn't mean you SHOULD hehe..

raw and sheer power aside, this is a pretty cool spacey tune, and when you finally sorta get used to the rawness of it it is pretty enjoyable, but you really do need to work on reining your levels in man.

Also not really digging the crazy percussion around the 2:50 mark, felt distracting - but I like that you are diversifying and trying things out :)

keep trying keep improving! :)

-shawn (Chronamut)-

feandesign responds:

Thanks for an honest review, it means a lot to me! I guess you're right about the bass overuse, 3:11 is where I definitely exaggerated by inserting one more bass pattern LOL. I tried my best to avoid any clipping and if I remember correctly I had the limiter enabled in this project, so next time I'll make sure I have it disabled and experiment with levels myself. 2:50 is where I started messing with Gross Beat automation and I still kinda need to learn that, because all I'm doing with it right now honestly is just inserting points in random places :V. Thanks once again and I'll surely keep improving my skills!

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feandesign
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4.30 / 5.00

Uploaded
Feb 10, 2019
12:15 PM EST
Genre
Trance
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9.7 MB
4 min 14 sec
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