outrageously long loops. one loop was aroun 1min 20 sec. It was rediculous. all you are really doing is taking loops that you have either made, or used from the software, and just looping them over and over.
There is not skill in that. You need to learn how to create your wown loops (like everyone here), and if you already are, than you need to learn how to be more creative.
Im trying to be fair, but that C.D. needs alot of work. Keep trying though.
In is lacking in some parts. (0:56-1:09) there's a weird sound that doesn't fit, I recommend breakbeats (that is if Breakbeats are what I think they are). And 1:47-2:30 is repetative, recommend you fluctuate the sound. So I'm partial to jesuswalks9 in short.
~FireKitsune, sorting sallow socks sorely
It was nice but...
There were definitly some parts in the song that weren't supposed to be together, next time you'll wanna try to seperate those parts, it just made the music experiance very jarring at that point. It was a great lead but something tells me that you used some sort of pre-made lead and added new voices to it. If it truly is your lead, Kudos to you, if not, avoid doing that, it takes away originality. Nice effort, I should give you a 3, but your getting a 4 insted.
I enjoyed this song
Some of it was really repetitive, but then BOOM! It got right into pace. You've done a good job here, NinjaGirl.
wait till my next song is uploaded, you'll be surprized about how simple it may sound. this one had more work making it than anything else.