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I was feeling it once the new beat kicked in at 0:43. But the weird techno voice was annoying at some parts man, I gotta admit it. You should work on it some more a lil. It does kinda hurt my ears after awhile. But other than that yeah it's pretty good.

I highly disagree.

The sounds ARE on the sharp side, bút i like it,i guess someone needed to say it was a bit sharp i don't blame you. i used it in my Redfaction map 3 years ago now lol. Anyway It's an exelent Industrial sounding song and it is made quite good.

not what i call hip-hop

this is more a version of trance, the ctitics: it's almost the same thing the whole time, sometimes something new adds but that's going away after some time, the little sharp noise pretty hurts your ears when you listen long, try to make it a bit less sharp, further, good song