Its good and has a lot of potential as a song. Try not using so much distorition and then your melodies can come out. The song has good ideas in it just needs to be cleared up. Also its repetitive. Go back and try to figure out a new theme that will make it stand out more.
I dont think it was as good as Smackindaface. It lost A lot of its originality I would suggest to use a keyboard solo or something of the sort. Its great just needed a little more rhythm.