WEll I never heard the original song so I dont exactly know how much of it you changed around, but just talking about the song itself I thought it was awsome. Almost sounded something like a final fantasy menu music thing. Though it was a bit short and didnt loop very well. If you are going to make a song short like this, I would at least make it loop good. Anyways I still thought it was a really nice song. Good job.
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