***Jan. NAC 2019 Judge review***
ayyyyyy testuser whatup man. Great job making the top 8. Cool selection as well. I think you improved quite a lot of aspects to it. This is a super technical fix and its good you'll be learning now, but when you lo-fi in a mix like you do in the intro you've got to be sure to put some counter measures in the EQ either in the sound generators or master envelope or wherever to counteract any crackly fuzz effect like I hear at the 0:04 - 0:10 marks (cant fool us fellow producers I know that crackle not supposed to be there ;) ), and because thats an intro stumble I'd say thats a -1. Thiccc drums Thicc bazz, good melody, gangster feel. I'm gonna give a -0.5 for the length because I wanted this to develop into a 3 min banger based on the direction you took it its like epic build epic build... crescendo for 10 seconds (lol) and epic outro, epic outro, kinda wonky so -0.5. . Don't ever give up music. You got the ear and base talent etc etc.
Original Piece: 4.0