You do have talent
When I first joined newgrounds (for the audio portal XD) I found myself on a rollarcoaster of good/bad songs left and right. Now though its all uphill...and you are certainly no exception. You have quite a bit of talent (more than me anyhow) and I personally think that you should really get into one song...spend a month on it if you have to O_o :D. Like previously said, you have talent, enough so that if you truly applied yourself I think you could rival some of the best on here, or am I going over my head? Very nice tune, clarity is decent, overall very good.
Keep it up!
My best reivew of them all.Thanks so much for this comment, it brought a smile to my face. :).
I reckon if i do put some more time and effort in i could create something that would blow people away. :D.
I'll see what i can do.