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The World Revolving (Lounge Mix)

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something I did for fun, a little smooth jazz/lounge remix of The World Revolving from Deltarune.

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This makes me think “Mafia Jevil”

Groovy. Right off the bat, I'd say your sax is a smidge loud. Nice groove to the piece though. Almost as if your instruments are conversing! That sax roll at 42 seconds is A++

Haven't heard the original but this is very nice. Has a sweet tone to it too.

Something chirpy about it. Sounds fitting for a TV show of sorts, perhaps as an intro theme or credit roll if we are back in the 90s or so.

Good stuff dude and nice performance all round.

Did you play all the instruments yourself? If so, nice!!

Anymore reviews, send me a pm. Peace.

Since your song didn't receive a review, I will be reviewing this additionally.

The pacing on this song is pretty nice, however, the bass in the song is confusing me for a jazz song. I would look to other jazz song to see how the bass parts is played because there usually is a bit more variety in it (a common critique I have with a lot of songs on newgrounds), but the bass doesn't stop the song from being bad.

The harmonies are coming pretty nice. It sounds like you have a panflute in the backgrounds which is adding a lot to the worldly atmosphere. The one thing I would suggest is having some chord changes with the melody to create more diversity because it stick (from what I assume) in the B-major chord and doesnt deviate from that at all. If you can have more things going with the song, it will help, but for the time being, just practice on having alternate chords on deck to have the chord progression become more varied even if it doesn't last long in the song.

Otherwise, you have a solid song.

Also, I have scouted you.

SevenChakras responds:

this was a super helpful review, especially since this is my first time ever trying to make a jazz song. also, thank you so much! you really helped me today, and I appreciate it!

it sounds pretty noice

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Uploaded
Jan 21, 2019
11:16 AM EST
Genre
Jazz
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3.1 MB
2 min 45 sec
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