The melody is pretty spot-on to the original. The mainline is a lot more pronounced than the original and has more of a drive, however, if that synth is supposed to sound that distorted, I do not like it at all. It makes it sound too broken and poorly mastered.
That bassline with the kick is way too over-powering than the rest of the track and sort of cancels everything else out. It may need to be sidechained, so as not to over-drive everything else being played alongside it.
It seems like this track could keep going, but just sort of ends. It's not a bad track, but not really that great. Nothing is really that memorable or powerful that sticks out IMO. There's more room for improvement than praise. I know you can honestly do better. I will say though, this had a pretty kickin' intro!