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My very first trance song. Constructive criticism is appreciated!

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This is exactly the kind of music I love, ALL of your songs are great, how did I never know about you before??? Gonna put em all on my ipod right now lol

just an idea

maybe speed it up like 15-20 bpm, it worked for a song or two of mine and made them sound allot better.
but this sounds pretty good the way it is.

Dj-UnKnOwN responds:

since it was my first song i dont think i had any idea what bpm was, so i think i just kept it at 140, but i'm actually really surprised that my first song has a very good score...

i like it

its good
i would like to use this in a game im making. Would that be ok with you???

Dj-UnKnOwN responds:

Yeah of course you can. As song as i'm credited. Can't wait to play it


Solid performance

most of the trance fundamentals were there, build up, pauses before new instrument... ect, good looping, an all round solid, but not remarkable piece. i think i'll DL it.

Dj-UnKnOwN responds:

Haha of course not remarkable piece, it was my first. But every thing in this song was 100% me and this is my most rewarding piece. Thanks for the review

Ok, BIG review time =)

Ok, so the the beat was good all the way, through, although it coulda been a little hard on the kick, to go with the snare. The starting melody sounded good, but the echo was wrong, i think it shoulda been goin with the beat instead. The bass was a bit light as well, that woulda sounded better much thicker and deeper. And when the starting melody got to the climax of the song, it sounded a bit empty, especially after the reverse beat brought up the two tunes together. It also woulda sounded much better if you put a second synth in unison with it.
This is a very good tune, i think it could be presented better though.

Credits & Info


4.39 / 5.00

Jun 11, 2007
7:06 PM EDT
File Info
1.6 MB
1 min 47 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.