I like how you kept a certain pattern to the piece the whole way through, i liked the voice clip you added in here too. Overall a very well done piece of music, sounded good all the way through.
Thanks :) I rlly appreciate the positive feedback, It's what keeps me at my desk ;D
Ya it was pretty good when it comes to just messing around. But as a song itself, it just seamed like one big intro. I mean it still had great synth and a really nice drum beat but it lacked the fast paced action that you hear once you go into the chorus.
If I were you I would save the first 20 seconds of this song for an intro to one of your other songs. I think it would sound really good. But as the song goes, Im going to vote 5 because I still thought it was pretty cool. Good job.
Hey thx for the great review, Yeah it wasn't as strong, or emotional as my other songs but like I said, I was just kinda messing around. Yeah now that i've posted I've done some touch ups to the song but I hate resubmitting. Hopefully when I get motivated i'm going to throw up a myspace for my beats. Anywayz, ur review is very helpful and great appreciated, thx much.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.