Hip-hop generally doesn't use techno samples. I also know that "pluck" sample. Don't use default noises. It's time you learned to make your own. The beats alright, and I kind of like the tune, but it sounds too Fruity Loops-related. Diversity is needed.
awesome for a first beat man.
u have talent folk. just keep up the good work man and do whatchu do. good job on that project too man. holla@chaboi