+ I like the intro -you could chuck some more volume into it if you wanted
+ The melodies in the intro are decent
- That sweeping noise around 23 seconds is a bit harsh on the ears
+ The drop has a nice background bit, the ragga style instrument, a pluck of sorts, chuck more volume into that for sure
+ The dirty bass around 1:03 could for sure have more of its own sections, it's pretty gangster
+ That build up around 1:34 is very nice, the strings chuck a whole new ambience into it
+ Vocal was a nice touch around 1:50
My suggestion would be to focus a bit more on your volume levels. Try and get each synth into their own space, so they are clearly audible and boost parts that are quieter, just increase the volume on them firstly, and use a compressor if you need.
Cool melodies dude, keep it up!