...TBH, I still think the original beats almost every remix that's been made of the song thus far. But, aside from that...for a character who is my personal favorite character in Deltarune so far (even before he got memed)? You definitely gave him what he deserved, with so much amazing additions from your own original melodies added in.
My only complaint about this is that I think it could've been faster. But then again, that statement makes an assumption about how it might be used, were it actually in Deltarune. But, overall, good job. Keep it up.
...totally unrelated to the music...I noticed your PFP, and that the song is tagged "furry"...so I'm assuming you're a furry, then. In that case...from one furry to another, excellent pick on that fursona.