Nice but some problems
For flaws, they have basically been mentioned. Flute should be more prevalent, should loop better etc. It was good but not the best.
bit repetetive, good vibe, peaceful
I really liked this one Bosa. It gives off that peaceful air as you said in your description, the song also loops rather well, though not perfectly.
MJTTOMB already brought up some good points, so there is no point in regurgitating what he wrote, though I felt that the violin/pico thing wasn't THAT tiring. Though I definitely agree a nice perc beat would be nice here.
I also think more reverb on that flute would have made it much more powerful, more epic as this song seems to say to me.
Not much else to write, it was an enjoyable song, and that is really all that matters. Keep up the good fight and keep em coming!
come on , ur bosa, a lot of your songs are cool,
i dont know how you make your songs, en how you do get the inspiration.
This rocks anyway , and everybosy with tast of music knows that.
i'll use it in my own amde dvd or something
Thanks, man! I hope that DVD comes out well!
Just a few suggestions:
Harmony. Sometimes having quite a few instruments on one melody can sound good, but here it gets a little tiring, for lack of a better word. Adding little differences between the violin section and flute/piccolo thing (whatever it is, you get the picture i think.)
Percussion. A good percussion section would do wonders here. Not to say it needs a constant beat going, simply a cymbal crash at the beginning of every other measure or so, and then a light drum roll about a half note later would sound good.
Keep up the good work.
Now for the review.
Originality: Completely original as far as I can see. Sounds a bit like the Star Wars theme or something for a second there. Haha. 10.
Diversity: Repetitive, yet only moderately, so it's ok. 9.
Clarity: The flute/piccolo thing sounds a little wierd on the lower notes. Maybe try transposing that back an octave up. Otherwise, everything else is good. 9
Effort: Not only good effort, but good results as well. 10.
If you get a chance, check out some of my music as well. Reviews (even bad ones) are appreciated.
Thanks for the advice, friend. I'll be sure to check some of your music as well.
Yeah, pretty calming hehe
Hey, nice track. Like the calming feel to it. It kind of sounds like some sort of a cinematic piece, most likely, as you say, in some sort of field. Very emotional, and quite good! Thanks for the submit, check out my stuff if you get the time ^_^
Sure will, buddy! Thanks for the review.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.