Hmm

I like the beat...but if you wish to work with this...I recommend you stack some of the notes on top of each other. It will get complicated this way...but the quality would go up I think. Also fix the (what is that? =.=) harp? thingy around 2/3 through the song, bounce the tune around a little bit, knock yourself upside the head for no reason...and there! *cough* anyhow...enough of that...not a bad tune as I said...just mess with it a bit, I think it has a bit of potential as do you if you spent some more time on some of these...though it is amazing the quality songs you are uploading in the time frame that I see. Keep it up^^