Out of Place...
Its all mixed matched and wierd. Maybe thats how its supposed to be but it sounds too strange. Good job on the FX though.
Originality 9: New and cool piece. Haven't heard something like this before.
Clarity 7: Screeching.
Diversity 9: Many sounds in this.
Effort 10: Must have taken you a long time to combine all these things into one.
You have like 4 or 5 songs in one here. Make them all separate. They all were really good. BUT PLEASE take out that screeching! It hurts my ears so.
really random. not much of a song.
how much of it wasnt loops dude. make something original. not trying to put you down, its just that theres to many garage band loops and not much else. it doesnt really flow at all either.
Yeah, I kinda agree with you, I made this a while back, and I just found it, it's kinda amateur.