This is quite good for a beginner.
And Don't mind b0z0. He's just a troll, he gives bad reviews to everyone (and hhe has no talent whatsoever at making music XP). Just ignoore him and report him. Hopefully he'll be banned, but apparently the ng staff doesn't care.
I really liked this. It had a different sort of style than most techno song have. Almost like a funk type fealing to it. I really liked the percussions in this song and they were accompanied by great synth. It was just a plain out good song. Good job.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.