Originality 9: Very strange, strange is good!
Clarity 9: Fine quality
Diversity 9: You had a lot going on in a 5 second loop!
Effort 8: ...it's 5 seconds.
Due to the shortness of this loop, I really can't review you on too much. I can't really tell you what's good or what's bad about this. Make some longer songs so I can! =) You have potential, it just seems like you aren't pushing for it. Take a step out of the ordinary, who cares if a songs bad? At least you tried, right?
Anyway, Keep trying.
One day I will make a great, original, groundbreaking, 3 minute song.............but not anytime soon. To lazy.