Not bad, but sounds like the wrong genre
It sounds like it should be an ambience piece, not trance. Might just be my personal opinion though. Nice work.
Don't creep me out like that man! JEez this is good. ^^
this is a very well written song. i believe that the best attribute of this song would be the smooth flow of it. now yes, this does go on a little longer than it should but i believe that it makes up for it with sound and flow. so this gets a 8/10
not very creative
I would of liked this more if it hadnt of dragged on for so long
I'm not sure if I'm asking too much, but would you mind Pming me and telling me why you think it isn't creative? I love to hear all kinds of opinions - although I have no room for unfounded critisism - or hypocracy. I'll give you the point that it does "drag on" although my opinion is that its fine the way it is. Everyone has a different sense of what is "creative" (some people bid on paintings of a black canvas with a yellow stripe down the right side, for millions of dollars). I don't want to come off sounding mean, or crabby - I would just like some input, to further my creativity.
i really liked this song! good work!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.