reminds me, kinda, of sonic, for some reason...
VG Melodies :p
The melodies remind me of something out of a video game, like old school Nintendo FF type shiz. You had an interesting layer of synths that generally flowed together well. Unfortunately there is no central drive through out the song. Because of this there is almost a lack of flow and direction, and makes it hard for me to stay focused. I think the harp could be turned down, and the kick boosted. Keep working on your mixes.
Keep it wildstyle!
Your Friendly Neighborhood SineWeaver :]
"I think the harp could be turned down, and the kick boosted" - BeatmasterJAG
Lol thats funny, because i kerep getting revies to tune down the bass and kicks and highten the harp^^ well guess to please yah all, i'll just have to keep them both the same. Thanks for the review, and yah, looking back, the flow and drive was lacking. -Laesil
try more instruments
The song has a nice melody that is easy to follow, but try harmonizing it with other instruments to create more feel for the song. Try and create a big climax and add more instrument and tone variety.
Otherwise, again, the melody was good and well thought out.
Yah, I was just trying to make a nice string melody, but I'll remember what you said, and thanks for the advice, and btw, who the heck gave me a 0, lol(not that you'd know who)? Bah someone prolly just gave me a 0 without listening, or something.