The 2nd sound (I can't really identify it) doesn't work as well as either of the other 2 two sounds. something lighter or that doesn't have a constant sound might sound a bit better.
You know, no matter how many times I see your name, I always think of the other Paragon!! GRR..
any way. This song..well. The melody can be just a tad high in some areas, MAKES MY SPEAKERS SQUEAK!! haha
Nice sounding song though
THANKS! YOU ROCK
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.