the intro was decent (could use a fade in effect)
the melody at 0:30 is good but at 0:36 and 0:42(almost) the volume rises suddenly or something
01:12 to 1:23 sounds so empty for me
1:24 >> 2:29 is the best part except for 1:44 to 1:49(i think u used that synth u made as a chord which does not sound good)
Also you should try to be more creative since this sounds like a lot of other songs
you did a great job! keep up the good work!!