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From caffeine to hypnotics.
Morning husk.
Reset.restart.redo.repeat,
All in a days work,
until this body fails me.

To and from the wastes.
The waves are good.
No time these days.
If we're lucky. . .
It won't all burn out.

Familiar chords,
familiar dates.

Dreams to shave the grind.

Zzz.

(Work In Progress. Got new speakers, so I whipped this up. No more headphone mixes.)

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Nice. The only issue is the sub bass. For me, the waveform isn't complex enough : that sine sub could be replaced by a triangle one, or modulated by itself towards a smooth sawtooth one, or could get unison applied. Then, I find it not bassy enough. Pitching it down one octave could help. Besides this, every instrument is great, or perfect. Great track !

I just can say... umh... Oh, bro it's great!

Oh wow. I really like how detailed this song is. And the way all those sounds blend in together. Plus, it's a mix of almost all my favourite genres. Would've had some chances here and there in this song to create a great melody, but that's just me. But those rhodes [is that what you call it] at the beginning felt a bit muddy whenever it goes low. Maybe remove that heavy sub bass at the beginning and unfold it later on? That's all from me I guess, hope you create more stuff like this.

Lapse responds:

Thanks man. Still shaping it up, need to hit the forge again. Definitely a bit muddy, I plan on clearing it up a bit. The whole song started with that simple heavy sub, kinda got lost in it, till the guitar comes in.

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Dec 7, 2018
5:18 PM EST
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Fusion
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3 min 50 sec
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