I like the atmospheric vibe at the beginning. The texture doesn’t sound very distinct, especially in the upper register, but the shimmering effect is quite soothing. I think my main problem with the piece is that compositionally it’s a bit underwhelming. There are a couple of jarring transitions (1:03, 1:27), and there isn’t a lot of harmonic variety in the piece at all. By around 1:45, I’m confused about the directionality of the piece. You’ve introduced a couple of electronic elements rather close to the end of the piece without much foreshadowing. There are a lot of cool riffs and melodic ideas here, but to be honest the piece feels a little thrown-together. I’d suggest spending a bit more time on the arrangement and adding some more memorable melodic content, perhaps via a guitar solo or dreamy bridge. Otherwise, I like the mood and sound design. The quality of the texture sounds really unique. Keep at it, Yoshiii343!
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