I really love the vibe of this song, the only thing that seems to sound a little off is the orchestra hits that start around 0:27, the dun, dun dun. I would be interested in what it would sound like if the last 2 hits in the loop were a little closer together. more of a dun, dundun. I'm probably explaining this wrong because I'm not a musical person, but I tried. I think you might have been going for a dun, dun-dun, but its just a hair off. It might also sound better to lengthen the time between those last two hits, it's honestly a toss up.