I applaud the effort!
you know, I really liked the melodic line in this piece! The synths need to be upgraded, the strings the synths in general, but moving past all that, focusing on the melody itself, this piece shows some interesting potential.
When the strings and the chords meet, there is a fair deal of clashing there, be sure to watch out for dissonance (or when 2 keys play right beside each other), as this generally creates an uncomfortable feeling (very useful for tense, scary moments!)
I liked it when the bell like things joined in.
From that reverse symbol I take it you use Fruity Studio's? Which one?
I would highly recommend using Sytrus as a great starting kit, some amazing synths there. The pads would provide you with great background sounds.
In any case, I admire your effort Alex-J, keep up the good fight and keep them coming! You can go as far as you want.
Hey thanx for the tips! As you said, yeah Sytrus would surely help but I didn't even know my music would end up being not bad so i just tried blending some new stuff in it. Btw I use fruity studios 6 and 7 (because i dont always use same computer).
Thanx for taking your time to come by and review my music, this is a good example why newgrounds audio site is great, because really good artists take the time to give help and comment less advanced music makers. Its like if everyone could talk to a famous person whenever they needed it.
So I appreciate your review and ill review more of ur stuff cya!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.