To be honest with you I'm not entirely sure how you would improve on this track, I loved it. It had the ambient feel to it in the beginning, slowly adding in the other instruments and sounds. The out-of-nowhere bass distortion was nice, it broke the monotony and surprised me. The only thing I could really request is to use that climactic ending and use it like a break, only to bring the track even higher and intense. :)
Very nice track - great timbres, love the lo-fi sounds. Some nice techniques used.
Could have used a bit more percussion.
I know (hope) it was intentional but there did seems to be some unchecked distortion here and there - the problem is that in some spots there wasn't enough to make it obvious that it wasn't a mistake. I think that adding something that's clearly not distorted along side of it would help make your intention more obvious.
All around cool track. You get my 5.
Keep it up!
Glad you like it coffee. Hmm not sure which bits you mean, obviously I used quite a lot of distortion when the track picked up and when it was more mellow the quieter background synth was still somewhat distorted dunno if that answered your question lol :D
Thanks for the help I'll remember to use it next time im using distortion.
GREAT, but too slow
Pure awesome song. Too slow for my likings, but for a slow song it was GREAT! Keep up the good work!
Thanks for the response:) ha yea maybe it is too slow but I like that once in a while, you can really feel the rhythem of the track if it's a bit slower.
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