At first off...

Let me just say that this is pretty good for a young musician. Especially if this is your first attempt at house. And I still don't know why you put in the trance section. Ok, now onto the review. The melody was very square-ish. Add more fuzz to it to make it more interesting. I like the delay in the bass, sounds bouncy too me. I can't really hear the pads/strings. They are a bit too soft. Or is it just how it's supposed to be? Oo! I love the second synth. Overall, this sounds excellent. Look forward to hearing more songs!