I remember hearing the original pressure WIP and thinking "Wow, what an underrated gem." I love that you went back to it and tried a new take on it, it's refreshing to hear the new guitar and your new attempts at transitions.
PS: thanks for taking me back through memory lane, I played so much of Fenglee's AoT tribute game with this playing in the background, way back in 2014, and it was just so fitting flying around like Spiderman, trying to save humanity.
You can just feel the struggle through a cruel world, moments of despair mixed with simply brilliant hints of hope popping up throughout the piece. I'm so glad you decided to remake it, and bring that feeling back. Great stuff!