I actually really do like this.
Nothing here clashes, and I feel it jives well with itself. :)
I wasn't expecting for the melody to come in at 1:21, and was pleasantly surprised by that little tune. :)
If you are thinking about uploading more to this site, I'll scout you, so that your work will show up on the front music page, and you'll get way more views, and your songs will get noticed by everyone :)