It's okay but u did something wrong
I'm sry but heres my opinion. You lost sight of your objective on what u wanted to do. Don't pay any attention to what others tell you. I followed that path and it didnt work out so well for me anyways. Keep up the good work and do what you really want to do ok.
P.S. I have reviewed your first song so take my advice. Becasue I know what it's like to make a song. I'm an expert and music creation 5 1/2 years of experiance and I'm 14 too. See ya later ; )