The melodies you used here are great. The lead starting at 0:29 could've been just a little bit softer IMO, like a few %, nothing too big.
1:22 drop is undoubtedly the highlight of the track.
But the track is incredibly melodic and emotional, I can feel it through my headphones. I don't understand why your tracks are scored that low.
4.5/5, eager to hear what you'll be making in the future