Great first song :D
It was kind of cheesy, but it's actually pretty decent, especially since this is your first submission. The drums had a cool beat going on, and I liked the plucking instrument in the background.
I could see this in some beat em' up on the SNES. Great job. I gave it a five since you'll find that a lot of people just vote 0 on other people's songs so they can get on the top of the charts to whatever genre of music they're submitting to.