Good melodic ideas
I like the way the piano comes in, it reminds me of radiohead. Radiohead, the computer game, maybe?
But I have to agree with the last reviewer that it's a touch messy... it sounds as if you're using some strange quantize function and the beats are all a little bit off. Melody is ace, tho.
I was really happy to get your review btw, thanks :)
though i don't know what quantizing is, i'll agree that my drum situation is in rough shape. It amazes me how many emoticons have evolved over the past year though. 8-} (mentally insane)
Review for this song
(I'm the Grillpie guy on another account)
This had a true Video Game feeling. Which is mostly because of the assemble of square and sine waves. I can clearly hear some great melodies in the song, but you don't seem to be assembling them well. The result is quite a messy song with the different sequencer tracks hard to hear. If you had timed it... much better, it would sounds pretty damn awesome.
There's some sort of piano here too, which might be the reason for the massive clipping issue, master it a lot (or just set down the volume on everything) and get that disortion away.
Doesn't seem entirely finished, but it sure has great sides.
if it has a video game feeling, its not intentional; i just need to really get my skills with the analog synth up.
i'm actually very grateful for this review. im responding a while from when it was written.
this review actually put to my attention the lack of chordal structure in my songs, and my music was greatly improved afterwards