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Undead Rat

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I must find japanese statues who are good singers.

This is a song by japanese vocaloid software, Megurine Luka.
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"Undead Rat"

Lyrics:

Tap tap tap, aruite iku no wa
Undead ni shite wa ashidori no
Karui kohkina umare no
Nikukai yaroo sa
Shikkoku no kenami totonoete
Sebone no ichi o naoshi te
Boku no charmu-pointo wa
Ana-aki no mimi

Horeta ano ko ni au no sa
Watage no youna shironeko
Kimi no koki no me-tsuki de
Mitsumete okureyo
Tsume de hikkaku no wa nashi
Kiba de itabutte hoshii
Kimi no amagami ni zutto
Tsutsumare tain da

Let's play like Tom and Jerry
Let's play like Tom and Jerry
Let's play like Tom and Jerry
I'd love you to chase, chase, chase me
Let's play like Tom and Jerry
Let's play like Tom and Jerry
Let's play like Tom and Jerry
I want you to bite, bite, bite me
now

Tap tap tap, hashitte iku nowa
Undead ni shite wa kogireina
Iro ni oboreta awarena
Nikukai yaroo sa
Kimi no miryoku wa zaiaku
Naifu mitai ni togatta
Kyuso neko o kamu nante
Messo mo nai sa

Let's play like Tom and Jerry
Let's play like Tom and Jerry
Let's play like Tom and Jerry
I'd love you to chase, chase, chase me
Let's play like Tom and Jerry
Let's play like Tom and Jerry
Let's play like Tom and Jerry
I want you to bite, bite, bite me
now

(Tap tap tap, 歩いて行くのは
Undead にしては足取りの
軽い高貴な生まれの
肉塊野郎さ
漆黒の毛並み整えて
背骨の位置を直して
僕のチャームポイントは
穴開きの耳

惚れたあの娘に逢うのさ
綿毛のような白猫
君の好奇の目つきで
見つめておくれよ
爪で引っ掻くのはナシ
牙で甚振ってほしい
君の甘噛みにずっと
包まれたいんだ

Tap tap tap, 走って行くのは
Undead にしては小綺麗な
色に溺れた哀れな
肉塊野郎さ
君の魅力は罪悪
ナイフみたいにとがった
窮鼠猫を噛むなんて
滅相もないさ)

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Well first of all, this song isn't apart of the Drum and Bass genre. This is more of a modern house or synth pop due to this swing. I am personally not a fan of Japanese vocaloids just like the recent commentator but that doesn't stop me from reviewing this song.
For personal preference, the vocals need to come out more. If you're making a track with vocals in it, it should at least feature it along with the rest of the instruments. Secondly, the mastering for the bass kicks and the drums just overpower everything. I don't know if it's just me but the sine counter-melody feels very fair away aside from the drums. I also feel like the swing on the 16th notes are way too heavy to where it sounds like a jazz shuffle (Even though a lot of house and garage music tend to have house shuffle dancers). It's just the swing on the vocals don't sound that good. One more thing; this song reminds me of that really famous Alan Walker track that I despise but if you're going for that kind of sound, you're on the right track.

Precipitation24 responds:

Thank you for your advice. I will continue to practice diligence.
I think balance of vocals, bass kick, and other instruments is like that of curry powders.
It seems that I put bass spice too much X-P

I think Mr. Alan Walker is one of the great artists in the world.
I must study from him.

Nice, I'm not a fan of vocaloids, but this song is good (and Megurine is definitely not the worst among the vocaloids)

Precipitation24 responds:

Thank you!!
Now I'm studying American music a little.
"Electro Swing" is beautiful as well as a difficult genre.

Idk why I like it lol

Precipitation24 responds:

Thank you!!

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Uploaded
Oct 4, 2018
9:30 AM EDT
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2 min 55 sec
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