Building up to nothing?

I too really dug this at first, the whole tribal beat really had me going, then when the fast little synth came in it seemed kinda just. . .thrown in there. I liked the second synth though, the slower one.

Keep practicing, don't try too hard!

Battle?

This started off really promising, 'cos I dug the first couple of sounds (the drum sound especially) and thought they were really fitting for a battle-tribal-jungle thing. But then the lead synth note comes in, and it sounds like its in the wrong song. It really just didn't fit the track at all, in my opinion. That really detracted from the song. Then it drops out, a lion roars, and right when I expect it to build up to something substantial or battle-worthy, it sorta stays the same and then ends.

So, this track is pretty cool sounding, and interesting at first, but it really fails to go anywhere. The energy that would be suitable for an intense battle song isn't here, and although you said a mild battle, that seems more like an excuse for a failure to express something. Because what's the point of expressing a 'mild battle'? It clearly doesn't make for emotional, charged, exciting music.

Still, there are some good sounds here, and the structure is pretty good, aside from the fact that the track doesn't build towards anything or move anywhere. It doesn't look like each of your songs is taking you very long--try to spend lots of time with each track to make sure its worthwhile and says everything you want it to.

If you have the time, could you check out my newest song ( "Follow Me and You Will See" ) and leave a review? I'd appreciate it, thanks.