I suppose I can't redo my same comment from your other track. For this one, the range seems a bit better, I don't know if there was a difference in microphone positioning between this and Nature's Scorn. There's a pop at 0:53, which makes me think you might be using a headset mic. I have a similar issue with that, and really the only fix for that is using a pop shield and different microphone, which can be cost prohibitive.
You have some interesting poetry in you, I like it.