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May 18, 2007 | 12:41 AM EDT
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2.8 MB
3 min 1 sec
3.55 / 5.00

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Rated 3.55 / 5 stars
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Author Comments

1 love poem I made + music = very creepy song: stare into your dead lover's eyes YAY!



Rated 5 / 5 stars

A dark, poetic song...

I really enjoyed listening to this. The figure and the emotion in this song is just - great. Nicely done, man.


Rated 5 / 5 stars


Such wonderful poetry. 10/10-5/5

soulmasking responds:

Thanks man! I love your stuff as well. I gotta get on and get you those wav files! Thanks for the great review, and generous scores!



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

yeah goth!

Finally another goth on NG. Hard to hear what vox is saying. Should have made vox lower pitch to make more creepy. I'm not scared. The reverb gives haunting feeling though. Not much of a beat. Add some more dark sounds. Vox loops. Unique song. See yah

soulmasking responds:

While I prefer to create dark music and foreboding music, I personally do not consider myself "goth". I have a huge issue with LABELS like that.

While I agree with almost all your critiques it is pretty much impossible to remix the vocals. This song is one of the first I ever made on my OTHER computer. It is now my other computer because the hard drive crashed, nailing the coffin shut on all my samples I used to mix the song, and others like it. So I can't change that part; I hope the lyrics I included in the other response help you with understanding the song. As for a beat, I had no intention of creating a "beat" for it. It's sole purpose is to have a relentless, and creepy sound to the drums. I only wanted certain effects in it, so when decided how much "dark" sounds to place in, I opted to go lighter. Like I mentioned in an earlier review, the song was never MEANT to be creepy or malevolent. The song is supposed to give you the feeling... maybe this IS a song about killing the lady you love... or maybe it's about love, and just sounds kinda creepy. I will try to take as much of your advice to heart as I can. Hope you enjoyed it, and thanks for your review.



Rated 3.5 / 5 stars


quite unique
but i cant understand what he's saying

soulmasking responds:

I'm sorry that you couldn't understand what I was saying. I have placed the lyrics for the song at the bottom of this response. Thanks for your review.



In the morning I wake up to this cold empty space
I can't seem to remember what it was I was looking for
everything's wrong and I don't belong in this place
I can't seem to feel anything anymore, everything sore
then I fall forever staring into your face
realized I was mesmerized, your eyes
seconds of mind
sapphire shine of a kind
so beautiful it makes me...

Late at night I wake up cold in this empty case
I can't seem to remember what I was dreaming
Everything's gone, and I don't fit with this place
I can't have heard you screaming
(still hearing)
call me now and keep me forever
(lonely seconds)

seconds of mind
sapphire shine of a kind
so beautiful it makes me...

I hear you calling
and I'm still falling
screaming so clearly
bleeding so dearly
eyes mesmerizing
smile hypnotizing

seconds of mind
sapphire shine of a kind

so beautiful it makes me...

so beautiful it makes...


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


I really like this song. Its pretty spooky... ^_^ Yay!

soulmasking responds:

I originally wrote a nice sweet loving poem, about missing my girl. I then decided to place it to music and present the song to her as a gift... oddly enough the end result was a very creepy, dark, song. What originally was a love poem, turned into a song that seems more like a guy laying in bed starring at the dead eyes of his love and realizing he misses her since she's dead. I'd assume he killed her, but you never know. I also assume I put way too much thought into this shit. Thanks for your review.