I feel like your drops here are a bit disappointing. They don't pack enough punch to leave much of an impact. Try adding some fuller sounding instruments or some kind of burst of noise (e.g., crash cymbal or tam-tam) at the beginning. The song also needs a bit more of a dynamic range, as of right now, it kinda stays the same volume throughout the entire piece.
You have some great melodies, drums, and effects, but this piece does leave something to be desired after listening.