Right off the bat, I'm seeing brick-wall, sausage-casing mixing -- leave more headroom before mastering.
Drop is freaking fire. Had to stop what I was writing (I did this review on paper in a coffee shop) to comment.
Really interesting take on the tune; just too over-compressed for me to enjoy properly. Drums between drops are also a bit too loud, another symptom of heavy compression, and the mix lends itself to almost white-noise levels most of the piece. Despite that, it actually feels shorter than it is, which should speak to you about your phrasing: you're doing something right.
Fix the EQ/Compression issues, and this is a solid 9/10 for me.
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