You've still got a lot to learn
This was good for a second song. There was a few things I need to comment on.
1. FL Slayer - Its not really good for experienced users, I would advise not using it and maybe getting a new VST.
2. Movement - This piece didn't really go anywhere. Nothing happened, it just stayed with the guitar and piano.
3. Drums - The drums weren't very good. I could barely hear them, except for the overused crash.
4. Bass - The bassline was good. Keep using different bass parts, it adds a whole new level to the song.
Try exploring automation clips more and getting the program down.
Keep it up!