haha, bit of a weird one this mate, vey much 'computer music'.
The glitching is ace, i don't like that vocoder/talk synth one bit tho, too much of it and it detracts from the arrangement in the earlier part of the mix.
sort of reviewing on the fly here but the 2nd/3rd phrase of the piece is awesome, with the tablas, sax, and another sitar/guitar line. really mellow stuff. the glitch elements and 808s really compliment the sound here.
a dreamy, breathy harmony would be nice in that section.
haha the guitar in the 4th phrase is really jazzy, a weird choice of notation, too much delay on that vocal mind.
some of the instrument choices i wudnt necessarily make but then again this is your tune so who am i to complain, it's good stuff....one fault i have on it is it does seem to feel like theres 3 or 4 songs all put into one mix, missing a bit of glue. it's hard to make sense of. but the strongest part is definately the 2nd and 3rd phrase of the piece, definatley lose that vocoder synth early on tho.
good stuff mate, it's about a 4/5 in its present state. but cos im nice it's a 5.