You made this from Garageband. Still like it. Needs more diversity, as said below. I think you should get the FL 8 free trial, try that. I use garageband too, so you can check out some of my stuff.
The beat is good..
And the high synth melody breaks are good..
But its very repetitive, doesn't change very much. Even if it is just a short loop, you should add more diversity to it, change the melody around, add some more instruments etc. But you still have a very good base for a song here, keep it up.
Check out my music too,
maybe i do need to diversify it a bit, but not too much. If I had lyrics going along with it, it would be great. do ya agree?
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.