Nice dude. Only gripe would be the flow. Just needs something to glue together the sections. Perhaps some percussion or reverb on the tail?
The bits where you pause are making it tricky to stay engaged with the piece as they dont quite feel like natural pauses. For example at 1:29.
Dont let the volume fully fall off. Use some ambience via your reverb or delay to add a mini bridge of sorts. It also lets the listener know something is coming.
Using varied dynamics is nice. Just be careful not to contrast too high and jump out, especially the piano. At times it goes quiet then suddenly jumps really loud.
That style is fitting for a horror piece, it creates an unnerving feeling, but for a calm piece it's a bit much imo.
Hope this helps, peace