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Piano and saxophone with reverbs and equalizers.

Might need to turn your volume up.

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Nice dude. Only gripe would be the flow. Just needs something to glue together the sections. Perhaps some percussion or reverb on the tail?

The bits where you pause are making it tricky to stay engaged with the piece as they dont quite feel like natural pauses. For example at 1:29.

Dont let the volume fully fall off. Use some ambience via your reverb or delay to add a mini bridge of sorts. It also lets the listener know something is coming.

Using varied dynamics is nice. Just be careful not to contrast too high and jump out, especially the piano. At times it goes quiet then suddenly jumps really loud.

That style is fitting for a horror piece, it creates an unnerving feeling, but for a calm piece it's a bit much imo.

Hope this helps, peace

This song has potential in becoming great. It just needs more ... uhmmm ... accompaniment and flowing chord progression, etc.. Send me the stem tracks and I will collaborate with you on it. :) Anyway, keep it up!

Belthagor responds:

by stem tracks do you mean the fl studio file? pm me

Very nice

So I did have to turn my volume up but I like the sound you had here the piano is really good wouldnt mind some deeper piano and even some intense build up of it, And so I will end this review in just a tad, but before I do, I will say, you have impressed this reviewer alot, so keep up what you are doing cause it works just right. But I did find this pretty Fascinating and interesting, I like what you have here, And thats a wrap lol no but really as we come to the end here I will comment that these are some nice sounds and I do look forward to much more of what you bring to the table.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like the sound you had here the piano is really good wouldnt mind some deeper piano and even some intense build up of it

~X~

Belthagor responds:

Thanks!

A few people told me the piano is bad though.

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Belthagor
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Score
3.97 / 5.00

Uploaded
Aug 7, 2018
5:17 PM EDT
Genre
Jazz
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5.8 MB
2 min 34 sec
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