The arrangement of this song is great, but I'm not sure why the rhythm guitar is almost all on the right side. Makes it very hard to listen to. I can hear that it seems double tracked but the left channel is just sagging.
Actually, it seems like the track has been panned 20% right as a whole. I started questioning if my gear was malfunctioning.
Drums are also buried in the mix, and it sounds like your cymbals are all 127 velocity. Vary those some. I'm not sure if they're also intentionally lo-fi.
Other than that, great song aimed at the SJW keyboard warriors. Fix that and this will go on my repeat playlist. :)
I'm also fairly sure this is punk for the most part and not metal but I'm willing to suspend disbelief that it could be a hybrid of some kind. No score deduction there btw.
Thanks for coming out to NGUAC!